Being A Zookeeper

The first
couple of stops we’re going to make are the animals that are doing great in
their homes. The first animal we’re going to take care of is the American
Alligator (2), these guys have been around for a very long time. They live in
swaps and they like warm weather.


The scientist that are here in the zoo to look at some
animal bones. These animal bones are so we can see what animal this was before
it left the earth. And when they find out bones they are we see where this
animal lived and what the place was like. We don’t want any more animals to
leave the earth from something bad happening to them. The animal that the
scientist are looking at looks like a fish (4).
Well
this looks like the end of our fun time together. I hope you learned a lot about
our animals. We need to take care of these animals that are here on earth. The ways
that we can help is to take care of the earth. You guys were great zoo keepers
today. Thank you for coming to the zoo.
Work cited
1). http://www.preschool-plan-it.com/zoo-theme.html
2).http://www.tpwd.state.tx.us/huntwild/wild/species/americanalligator/
3). http://gifts.worldwildlife.org/gift-center/gifts/Species-Adoptions/Black-footed-Ferret.aspx
4).
http://www.fanpop.com/clubs/fossils/images/22216858/title/fossils-wallpaper
http://www.fanpop.com/clubs/fossils/images/22216858/title/fossils-wallpaper
1. You have the same picture up twice.
ReplyDelete2.References on then picture need to be seen better as in what source goes to what picture.
3.did a good job on making the blog simple and readable for young readers.
4.try to make the blog more "kidish"
5.Citations are done in correctly, look on perdue owl to help
the pictures are out of order in the paper.
ReplyDeletegood use of images.
few spelling errors read over and it will be an easy fix.
good Intro and ending
kid friendly